hastened words bounce off hollow hearts
thoughts evaded driven by pure adrenaline
corroded silver linings fighting to shine through
failing and flailing, tested through tempests
tortoise shelled egos hindering progress
heavy promises anchor wispy reactions
a pause, a cause for concern
rational thought sings like a chorus
lifting the concealed reason for confrontation
exposed innards dangle vulnerably in sight
chagrins depart as the death kill never comes
parting clouds reveal red sky at night
calm seas are predicted ahead


One Response to “fight”

  1. wally426 said

    Maybe it’s just coincidence, but I noticed that the lines where the fighting grew more intense were longer. The ones where it had calmed or paused were shorter. Awesome piece…

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